Tuesday, 1 March 2016


I smell fluffy golden popcorn wafting to my nose. I hear popping traveling through the room. All could hear the mouth watering sound. I see popcorn bungy jumping into the bowl. It flings out into the air like Superman flying straight for the sky. The popcorn finally reached me and as I taste the salty chewy popcorn I relax myself, feeling warmer and warmer as I chew and chew. 


  1. Take my money and give me popcorn!!!!

  2. "The popcorn finally reached me" This is a great line as it creates a sense of anticipation you had to endure whilst waiting to have some popcorn. Kiri