Wednesday, 29 April 2015

Fern writing

Observational writing

The fern is all the same colour but the effect on the bottom is lighter than the tree-like top. It's smoother than a newly made paper. It waves like a flower that has just sprouted out. It sounds like a crumbling piece of paper when I scratch it up.

When you pick it up, on the edge, are little jagged mountains that smoothly spike you. It's really crispy when you pick it up.

2 comments:

  1. I loved how you described the way how the fern looks and

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  2. This is caring on from the first one. How you used lots of good words I can just pitcher it in my head.

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